Post by Randall Jones on Apr 13, 2005 0:11:20 GMT -5
I redesigned our flyer over the weekend because the old one clearly wasn't working well. I tried to make it more interesting and marketable to the public. I posted the text on misc.market to test the waters and received one reply.
I think the new flyer is better than the old, but it still has a lot of flaws. I printed out a few for distribution right now, but ideally I'd like to revise it into something a little better. I already spoke with Xander about possible areas for improvement.
I will post the text of the flyer below so you guys can give me feedback on what is good/bad and suggest changes. Just post your comments and suggestions in this thread.
? Are you interested in SUBMISSION FIGHTING (UFC, Pride, MMA, etc.)?
? Are you interested in MARTIAL ARTS?
? Do you want to learn a FUN martial art that REALLY WORKS?
Come to the CMU Grappling Club!
No experience is necessary. No uniform is required. Classes are always 100% free. Just come wearing comfortable workout clothes. Learn submission grappling in a safe and fun environment. Classes are taught by instructors with a combined 30+ years of martial arts experience. This is not a “fight club” where people get beat up. This is a real martial arts class where you can learn techniques to neutralize bigger and stronger attackers on the ground. These techniques really work. Come see for yourself. You have nothing to lose!
CMU Grappling Club
Tuesdays and Thursdays
7:00 PM
Skibo Gymnasium, Third Floor (Look for the white mats)
CMU Grappling Club
www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/rcjones
REAL martial arts that WORK
I think the new flyer is better than the old, but it still has a lot of flaws. I printed out a few for distribution right now, but ideally I'd like to revise it into something a little better. I already spoke with Xander about possible areas for improvement.
I will post the text of the flyer below so you guys can give me feedback on what is good/bad and suggest changes. Just post your comments and suggestions in this thread.
? Are you interested in SUBMISSION FIGHTING (UFC, Pride, MMA, etc.)?
? Are you interested in MARTIAL ARTS?
? Do you want to learn a FUN martial art that REALLY WORKS?
Come to the CMU Grappling Club!
No experience is necessary. No uniform is required. Classes are always 100% free. Just come wearing comfortable workout clothes. Learn submission grappling in a safe and fun environment. Classes are taught by instructors with a combined 30+ years of martial arts experience. This is not a “fight club” where people get beat up. This is a real martial arts class where you can learn techniques to neutralize bigger and stronger attackers on the ground. These techniques really work. Come see for yourself. You have nothing to lose!
CMU Grappling Club
Tuesdays and Thursdays
7:00 PM
Skibo Gymnasium, Third Floor (Look for the white mats)
CMU Grappling Club
www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/rcjones
REAL martial arts that WORK